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[The photo is old. In all actuality, I was sick and pale so my cheeks and lips looked very red and my hair curled for some reason. Since I could only stay in the house, I was sitting on my bathroom counter when I randomly this picture. And I just now added a vintage effect! Aren't I talented? Yeah, I know, "Not really.".]
Anyways, I think every writer hates their work at some point. I just never like my work. I feel childish in all my writings and I have been under a lot of stress lately with all that goes on in life and love, so I vented poetically-ish. So here's my vent. Yep. Critique, comment or ask if you like.
EDIT: For critique purposes-
This doesn't really have much of a genre other than "emotional", I don't think.
In critiques, I'm looking to better myself. So syntax, grammar sentence flow, anything that bothers you other than my poor rhyme scheme. But if you want, you can critique/offer advice on that, as well.
Don't be afraid to be harsh! I won't get better with sugar-coating.